Spring,a wonderful season in my eyes.Hug,throw one's arms around somebody. When birds are singning,flowers are blooming,that means,spring is coming!With open arms, stood out among the flowers and plants, you can smell the breath of spring.In the spring running and chasing butterflies, smelling the fragrance of peach blossom, I with open arms, embrace spring. I would like to stretch out my arms, hug that belongs to my spring!

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　　Spring is a wonderful season. When you hear birds singing and see flowers blooming, that means spring is coming! Standing among the flowers and plants, I can smell the breath of spring. In spring, I like running and chasing butterflies, smelling the fragrance of peach blossom. I would like to stretch out my arms to welcome and embrace the beautiful spring!

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